Writing

LI- To revise and edit a recount
Today I did writing with my friend Lukah.On monday we had to write a recount,it was about kiwi can or kiwi sport or music.Then Mr O said that we had to be and group and told us a challenge.There is only one winner in the group,And we had to check each other work for points.Like for every addition but you can also get -points.I got 16 and my panther got 24,he won the challenge.