Improvements to a paragraph

LI- To make improvements to a recount

Today I had to edit a recount.Well before that we did a poster about basic punctuation.( like . ,() ?  !).I choosed to not use them as the punctuation looked good.Before I started editing I was in my group.This was a messed up recount and we had to find the parts to make correct.Then we had to choose a part of the paragraph and edit it.This is what I choosed, the tools that I used was google drawing.