Christmas stolen

LI- To write a narrative in the form of a play.
This week for writing we had to check our work and write dialogue. We checked the lines for the characters to make sure they make sense and that they don't just waste lines. We added when the narrator had to say his lines sand when people have to do things. We have been doing this for 2 weeks and this is the finial product. Our idea of this play is that mother christmas and the gritch have swapped bodies and felt like what is like to lose christmas and what its like to steal christmas.

Dialgue

LI- To write a narrative in the form of a play.
This week for writing we learnt about dialogue and how in a movie it makes it better. We watch a movie without lines and see how the impact of the film. This week we got a partner and wrote messages together and use what we said for the play. The play is between me and ong. In the coverstaion it keept on going because I ask a question then ong (big mack) answers it and follows it up with a question.